during in my holidays i went to visit to my aunt and my cousin . With my aunt we went to some shops i we bought some things .The next day i went with my parents and my brother to the park 41 and we were playing .The last day of holidays i went to celebrate the birthday of my aunt .
This Christmas holidays I was ill, but I pass Christmas with my aunt, uncle, cousins and some friends of my parents we spend the night dancing...also I pass New Year at my uncle house, we ate the 12 grapes and we also danced...finally we return to home at 3 a.m. we were tired. I have a great time while I was ill.
One of the moments that i enjoyed a lot was the three wise mens afternoon, no because of the presents, but because i was on my home town with my friends, and we went to the cavalcade, and two of our friends were dresed of the jacks of the three wise mens, and they were throwing sweets to us, and also they were throwing confetti to our hair.
It's funnier than interesting.You will laugh with this story. It was on Christmas,my mother was preparing the dinner for carry it to my cousin's house while my father , my brother and I were preparing our clothes for this celebration.While we were doing another things we didn't notice that it was raining a lot,so the plan that we had didn't work. At ten o'clock of the night we decided to go out and take a taxi for going to my cousin's house but there was another problem that all taxis were busy. We were getting wet and I was the only person who was laughing about this situation. So my mother decided to call her friend and asking if she could carry us to the house of my cousin.Fortunately she said yes! When we arrived to my cousin's house we were wet and our hairs too. We were late but it didn't matter. :)!
In this holidays I did a lot of things but not of all was interesting because I don´t like anythings of the holidays, well there is something it´s not very interesting but I like it. During this holidays the only thing I like was when my cousine did her baby shower, because I wass with my football´s friend and we laugh a lot because of the funny games that my cousin prepared for the older people.. It was a fantastic day!! :D The best day of my holidays! ^^
This Christmas I do a lot of things very interestings, but there is a thing I do and is that I paint my face with my friend, I ate a lot of sweets and I do a lot of photos.This was the best day in Christmas holiday because I was with the most important people in my life.
These Christmas holidays I went to my village. We celebrated the New years eve with all the people of the village. There was few snow but enought for skiing four days. These holidays I had ejoyed skiing and going out with friends.
This Christmas holidays were very Good and one day that I liked,was that all My Family goes to the shopping Centre and me too.We buy a los of things and food to celebrate The year.
This Christmas were recess I did lots of things but there was one that distingish between all of them , it was when I went to a mountain called the '' Nevero'' performing endurance ski.
during in my holidays i went to visit to my aunt and my cousin . With my aunt we went to some shops i we bought some things .The next day i went with my parents and my brother to the park 41 and we were playing .The last day of holidays i went to celebrate the birthday of my aunt .
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This Christmas holidays I was ill, but I pass Christmas with my aunt, uncle, cousins and some friends of my parents we spend the night dancing...also I pass New Year at my uncle house, we ate the 12 grapes and we also danced...finally we return to home at 3 a.m. we were tired. I have a great time while I was ill.
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One of the moments that i enjoyed a lot was the three wise mens afternoon, no because of the presents, but because i was on my home town with my friends, and we went to the cavalcade, and two of our friends were dresed of the jacks of the three wise mens, and they were throwing sweets to us, and also they were throwing confetti to our hair.
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It's funnier than interesting.You will laugh with this story.
ReplyDeleteIt was on Christmas,my mother was preparing the dinner for carry it to my cousin's house while my father , my brother and I were preparing our clothes for this celebration.While we were doing another things we didn't notice that it was raining a lot,so the plan that we had didn't work. At ten o'clock of the night we decided to go out and take a taxi for going to my cousin's house but there was another problem that all taxis were busy. We were getting wet and I was the only person who was laughing about this situation.
So my mother decided to call her friend and asking if she could carry us to the house of my cousin.Fortunately she said yes!
When we arrived to my cousin's house we were wet and our hairs too.
We were late but it didn't matter.
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In this holidays I did a lot of things but not of all was interesting because I don´t like anythings of the holidays, well there is something it´s not very interesting but I like it.
ReplyDeleteDuring this holidays the only thing I like was when my cousine did her baby shower, because I wass with my football´s friend and we laugh a lot because of the funny games that my cousin prepared for the older people..
It was a fantastic day!! :D The best day of my holidays! ^^
This Christmas I do a lot of things very interestings, but there is a thing I do and is that I paint my face with my friend, I ate a lot of sweets and I do a lot of photos.This was the best day in Christmas holiday because I was with the most important people in my life.
ReplyDeleteThese Christmas holidays I went to my village. We celebrated the New years eve with all the people of the village. There was few snow but enought for skiing four days. These holidays I had ejoyed skiing and going out with friends.
ReplyDeleteThis Christmas holidays were very Good and one day that I liked,was that all My Family goes to the shopping Centre and me too.We buy a los of things and food to celebrate The year.
ReplyDeleteThis Christmas were recess I did lots of things but there was one that distingish between all of them , it was when I went to a mountain called the '' Nevero'' performing endurance ski.
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